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The Continued Rise in the World’s Population
The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
Introduction
The world’s population is growing faster than ever, and some people say this is the biggest problem humanity is facing today. There are some reasons for this population growth, and while I agree it is an issue, I believe there are other problems that are more serious.
Causes of Population Growth
One main reason for a high population is that people are living longer now because of better healthcare. For example, doctors can treat many diseases that used to kill people, like certain types of infections. This means more people survive and live longer. Additionally, people now have access to better nutrition and clean drinking water, which helps them stay healthy and live longer lives. These improvements in health and nutrition have caused the population to keep growing over time.
Other More Serious Issues
Although having a large number of people can cause problems, such as crowded cities and more pollution, I believe other issues are more serious. For example, global warming is leading to more extreme weather events like floods and droughts, which directly affect many people’s lives. Moreover, we are using up natural resources quickly, like water, oil, and forests, and these resources are not easy to replace. These problems can harm both people and the planet faster than population growth.
Conclusion
In conclusion, while population growth has several causes, such as better healthcare and living conditions, I think that other problems, such as climate change and resource depletion, are more urgent issues that need to be addressed.
Tips for IELTS Task 2 Writing
📌 Clearly state the question and your position in the introduction.
📌 Organize your essay into clear paragraphs: introduction, body (causes, other issues), and conclusion.
📌 Provide examples to support your ideas.
📌 Use linking words like although, however, moreover to make your essay coherent.
📌 Summarize your opinion clearly in the conclusion.
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